What the film covers
A line in one student’s story says they got all of “them”, and the reader has to go back up the page to look for what “them” means. The film follows that linking through three stories, from a two to a four, with the four devices the guide names.
All ten criteria, with teaching moves, in how to teach narrative writingStories from the film
From the guide’s sample scripts, with the score each was given for Cohesion.
- My Story 2 out of 4
- Gambat 3 out of 4
- His eyes widened 4 out of 4


A handout to print
Stories from the film, and the scale for this criterion. It comes with free access.
