School writing-data review
For the person who leads teaching and learning, and the team in the room.
Bring the writing evidence your school already has to one table. Read it criterion by criterion, choose the one or two criteria that need a whole-school push, agree how teachers will teach them, and set a short task and a date to check again.
The meeting at a glance
About 75 minutes, with the evidence gathered beforehand.
- Before Gather the evidence
- 25 min Read it by criterion
- 15 min Choose the priority
- 20 min Agree the teaching
- 10 min Set the re-check
- 5 min Set the review date
Part 1: Gather the evidence you already have
Ask whoever holds each source to bring it, so the meeting is spent reading the evidence, not finding it.
Bring to the meeting
- NAPLAN writing results by criterion for each year level tested, from your school’s NAPLAN reports (your state or sector’s reporting tool). Note the year and the genre.
- The NAPLAN marking guide for that genre, narrative or persuasive, with its annotated samples.
- Results from a recent school writing task: one genre, one year level, marked on the same criteria.
- Moderation samples: three or four pieces per year level that teachers have marked together, with their scores.
- Anything else you already use, such as work samples or literacy progression checks.
| Source | Year levels | Genre | When written | Conditions Time, support, tools, typed or handwritten | Pieces |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| NAPLAN writing | |||||
| School writing task | |||||
| Moderation samples | |||||
| Other: |
Part 2: Read it criterion by criterion
Fill in one grid per year level. Compare each average as a share of its maximum: 2.6 out of 4 is 65%.
| Criterion | Out of Narr. · pers. | NAPLAN average | % | vs state +, = or − | Task average | % | What the samples show | Shortlist |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Audience | 6 | |||||||
| Text structure | 4 | |||||||
| Ideas | 5 | |||||||
| Character & setting Narrative only | 4 · – | |||||||
| Persuasive devices Persuasive only | – · 4 | |||||||
| Vocabulary | 5 | |||||||
| Cohesion | 4 | |||||||
| Paragraphing | 2 · 3 | |||||||
| Sentence structure | 6 | |||||||
| Punctuation | 5 | |||||||
| Spelling | 6 |
Maximums are from the NAPLAN marking guides. Leave “vs state” blank if your report gives no state or national figure.
Part 3: Choose one or two criteria for a whole-school push
Two at most. Every teacher will teach them, and fewer priorities get taught more often.
Priority 1
Priority 2
Part 4: Agree the teaching moves
Say what teachers will do, how often, and what you’ll see in the writing. Keep it small.
| Teaching move | Year levels | How often | What we’ll see in the writing | Who leads |
|---|---|---|---|---|
Part 5: Set a short task to check again
Match your starting evidence: the same genre, conditions and criteria. Mark a few pieces together first.
Part 6: Set the review point
Put the date in the calendar before anyone leaves the room.